The first two case studies are stronger than the third one, which is rather brief. You have done some nice analysis throughout, particularly of representations of the star. You imply which elements are conventional / typical- make this clearer. For all of them, I'd like to see more analysis of lettering / fonts. VC
The first two case studies are stronger than the third one, which is rather brief. You have done some nice analysis throughout, particularly of representations of the star. You imply which elements are conventional / typical- make this clearer. For all of them, I'd like to see more analysis of lettering / fonts. VC
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